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EDIT: Here's Chapter 8's script! :)...
Trunks' Date- Ch 8. -Script version- by genaminna
Trunks' Date- Ch. 9 -Script version- by genaminna ...And 9!
Trunks' Date- Ch. 10 -Script version- by genaminna 10! :)
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And by DBS, I mean Dragonball Super, of course... :XD: :)

Well! Let me just say that I am super happy that Mirai Trunks is back! (But will it ever be explained on why his hair is blue now? XD... idk, lolz)
Anyway, I realized that a lot of what has happened has been very similar to my Trunks' Date story (in later parts, haha... minus the Trunks/Mai thing... I would've never thought of that! lols).
Agh, so therefore... I got even less motivated to finish my story. XD -__-

Though, I wish I could, but at this point in my life, it's not really realistic. I really need to work on my originals and such. Besides, I kind of made the DBZ characters my own, sorta... but that's just generally what happens when you're doing fanmanga/doujishi, right?... But the original reason I did it was to practice, and also because there was basically no hope in ever getting DBZ revived (as in, Toriyama writing a canon for it). But now that we have that, I dunno... I'd like to respect the canon (even though the idea of Trunks/Mai is still a little redic/plot holey to me for now). But yeah.
(I'm semi-honored that things are sorta similar, lols.) I mean, I guess my story is just a sorta alternate reality type of thing... as all fanfics are...

To not leave you hanging, would you all like for me to upload the story in script form? You can choose to read it or not, if you are still hoping/waiting for the comic-version of it and don't want to be spoiled... XD (Of course, things might change once/if I ever do the actual drawn-out version. But at this point, I don't know. You might be waiting a super long time. XD (Get it? Dragoball Super? ok, nvm...lol) I highly doubt I will have the time/motivation to do a full comic version, so at least you'll get the story of it?... For closure purposes... that is, if you even want it.

(It's not even all of the way done, but I could at least aim to finish the script in a realistic time frame. Right now, there's 19 finished chapters. Working on #20 now. Might be 24 total?)

So, let me know. :aww: ^_^; (Gomen!)

P.S. If I ever get the time to finish/motivation the drawn-out version one day, I hope you don't mind the 'spoilers'! That's mostly what this post is about. I truly do love my story! But aghh..... real life obligations and such...

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RBL-M1A2Tanker Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
There's been a lot of work put into those scripts.  Good reads!
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genaminna Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2016  Professional Traditional Artist
I'm super-glad that you are appreciating them!! :) :) :heart:
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RBL-M1A2Tanker Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
They've been quite impressive.  Really captures the feel of the show, and a lot of thought clearly went into the scripts. 

Oddly enough, I can't actually place comments on them, otherwise I would (it's gotta be a glitch with dART), but point still stands: they're really good.  Would have been great to see drawn up, but half the battle is done already! :D
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genaminna Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2016  Professional Traditional Artist
Aw,that's really weird that DA won't let you comment, lol. But I'm grateful that you wanted to! And yup; half the battle is done! Haha xD thanks tho!!
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yugi-chan-0taku Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Go ahead and keep posting! I liked how you made your story your own. Although Super is interfering with a lot of ideas I used to have for years, it's still fun to have those "what if" scenarios.

I've tried looking into the whole blue hair thing, and the only logical explanation that makes sense to me is that it was an animation error, and they just rolled with it. Toriyama has claimed in interviews that he does sometimes forget specific colors for certain characters, which is apparent for the original DB series, when you see Bulma's hair change from purple to blue. I also think the animators felt it was easier to just keep the blue hair in order to avoid confusion between the two Trunks's. And not for the the sake of the fans, cause that would be kind of silly to spoon feed us that much. No, I think for the sake of the animators, while they're in the process of making episodes.

Don't know about you, but the Trunks/Mai thing is starting to grow on me. I think it's sweet, and I can't wait to see Future Mai reunite with him again. But I hate that little Mai is so obsessed with only the Future Trunks and pays no attention to the kid version. It's the same person! Stop trying to pursue what won't happen, and work on what's in front of you! (Oy vey!)

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genaminna Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2016  Professional Traditional Artist
Haha, she'll get the point eventually, I guess XDXD

Some parts are slightly plot-holey to me (including the Mai thing, like no one remembers they/the Pilaf gang existed??); that's mostly why I'm slightly annoyed by it... I dunno tho. And the blue hair thing is just weird XDD.
But thank you muchly for the support!
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yugi-chan-0taku Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Oh my gosh, I KNOW! HOW do they not know it's them?! That's so infuriating. I mean, it's fine if you wanna make that a thing, but at least explain WHY! Ugh...

Well, anyway no problem!

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HarleyLovett25 Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2016
Would love to read a script version of your fanfiction! Been waiting for the ending of it.
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genaminna Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2016  Professional Traditional Artist
Thanks! I'm starting to upload them now. ^_^
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trunkims Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
I've followed your fanmanga for what seems like an eternity lol I'd love to read the script and if ever, you find the motivation to continue a page or two in the future, I'll still read that too lol 
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genaminna Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2016  Professional Traditional Artist
lol, yay! Thanks for giving me your support!!
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trunkims Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
always!
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RBL-M1A2Tanker Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
I think that'd be neat to see.  At least folks would see were you were going with it and what you were looking to do. :)
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genaminna Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2016  Professional Traditional Artist
That's what I was thinkin'!
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SuperJeff62 Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Even if it's a script, it would be cool to see how this story ends.
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genaminna Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2016  Professional Traditional Artist
Ok :)
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Titangod Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2016
Well duh Trunks has blue hair. What colour did you think it was? Ligh purple? Whaaa... no you must be mistaken, it has always been blue. You. Be acting soo cray-cray.
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genaminna Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2016  Professional Traditional Artist
lol :XD:
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Saiyajin-hime Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I wouldn't mind seeing/reading what you had planned for your fan comic. Even if you ever decide to pick t up again it would be like we got to see a little sneak peek. XD

Yeah, in Battle of Gods the Trunks/Mai pairing felt a bit forced in my opinion whereas in Super I need to catch up on those episodes before I see how that relationship plays out. Still don't know why Trunks is sporting blue hair now yet in that flashback it's purple hair.
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genaminna Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2016  Professional Traditional Artist
lol, in some flashbacks, it shows normal DBZ footage with purple hair, then later, in redrawn flashbacks, it's blue again :XD: :XD: :XD: They rly don't know, huh XDDD Even after catching up to ep 52 now, the Trunks/Mai thing still feels a bit awkward XDD

But o.k. on the comic thing! lol. :) :) Maybe one day, I can!
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romantica12 Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Great to see you, again! Been a while. XD
While I would like to see the drawn-out version of the script, I would be more than happy to read the script version of your doujinshi, as busy as you are. :meow:
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genaminna Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2016  Professional Traditional Artist
I would also love to just be able to draw it all out. It's just that it doesn't seem possible to do in the near future, that's all. :XD:
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But thanks for the support ^^
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romantica12 Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
True, even though real life ensues, it's all right. Would like to see the script once it's finished. :la:
You're welcome! :)
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genaminna Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2016  Professional Traditional Artist
Ok :D :D ^^
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romantica12 Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
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Maphisto86 Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2016
Well I would rather read the finished fan comic rather than a script even if it may never happen. Your artwork makes is what makes it worth while. :thumbsup: On Dragonball Super, While I have spoiled it for myself by reading synopsis I actually have not seen the series itself yet. :ashamed: What do you think of it so far?
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genaminna Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2016  Professional Traditional Artist
Aw, thanks for liking my artwork tho! We'll see...! Maybe one day, but yah. Hard to tell nowadays.

The series itself is pretty good-- gets better after the basic rehashing of the most recent 2 DBZ/S movies and such.
A little plotholey in the case of the Pilaf/Mai/Shu, but oh well :XD:
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